Secret Fantasy Part 2

it needs work finish your sentences, either proof read it youself or get someone else to do it for you. the two stories I;ve read has so much potencial its exscrewchating when true genius is let down by poor gramer. from what I understand so far this is an ok story but it could be much better one more thing the husbund needs to get his knob shined by his wife and the chicks who fucked her as wel as force pleasure on her friends getting a lot more than great sex. wake the charactors up